Dedication but no thought
It's obvious dedication was put into creating the visuals and audio, the only problem is 1) there's no story/plot, 2) making it up as you go along is great if you're posting to newgrounds, but is not professional, and 3) what does exist is only compelling purely due to the visuals/audio. If this were a feature length film I'd walk out after 5 minutes. Since you're so good at the visuals, it's a squandering of talent not to couple it with real content.